Journal Entry No. 002
Digging A Little Deeper
July 11, 2026
I want to dig a little deeper into something I touched on yesterday.
I mentioned that I recently replaced one song in Duet with another. At first glance that might seem like a small creative decision, but it reminded me of an important lesson.
The original song, "Covered Bridge," felt right because it reflected Pennsylvania so well. Its imagery fit the landscape and the atmosphere I wanted the audience to experience.
But as I continued revising the screenplay, I realized the scene didn't need to deepen our understanding of the place. It needed to deepen our understanding of Annie.
"We Had a Good Run" isn't simply a different song. It expresses Annie's emotional journey as Ethan is finally beginning to understand it. In that moment, the relationship mattered more than the landscape.
That's one of the lessons I've learned while writing a music-driven film. Songs aren't interruptions in the story—they're dramatic scenes. Sometimes beautiful poetry has to give way to dramatic purpose.
Every revision is really asking the same question: Does this help tell the story more truthfully? That's the standard every creative decision has to meet.
The building continues.